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~CaRyNn~
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| Subject: Hope comes knocking.  Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:01 pm | |
| Hope comes knocking.The end of my world is reached,
Where the sky is falling into pieces,
Pieces of blue and gray around me,
All that’s left of my lonely world.
Then you showed me the light,
I reached out to you but the sky that once fell,
Reminded me of the pain and darkness I once felt..
The fall of my world left me with none,
So I worked hard to build us one,
Piece by piece, pain, joy, fear and anger,
Our world slowly comes back to life…
But as time pass our world slowly fade,
Please don’t destroy it, after all the effort made,
It’s beginning to shake, but I’ll try, My faith will remain,
Maintain our world, I pray, I wont feel darkness again.
I wont allow it to happen,
I cross my heart and make this vow,
No matter what our world will never be threatened ,
Even if we do part, it’ll be on good terms…
The promise you made I truly believe,
My heart and soul, you’ve now receive,
Together we walk this path of life,
Our hands held tightly our steps are light,
Let’s face life, by each other’s side…[img]  [/img] | |
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~CaRyNn~
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:02 pm | |
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Starlightz
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Location : Smwher not on Earth i suppose :P
| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:25 pm | |
| lol.. not bad...
u wrote it urself? | |
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~CaRyNn~
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:41 pm | |
| sort of.. me and chiew tsann~ 1 person one rangkap xD | |
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Lyn~
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:44 pm | |
| xD
u are soo dead..
if she finds out.. | |
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~CaRyNn~
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sat Jun 14, 2008 3:46 pm | |
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Joel T
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| | Subject: okla Sat Jun 14, 2008 6:18 pm | |
| quite nice not bad not bad...  | |
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Starlightz
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sat Jun 14, 2008 8:50 pm | |
| dat anime pic oso nice XD | |
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~CaRyNn~
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 12:48 am | |
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Sweet Innocence
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 4:57 pm | |
| nice pic...
weird poem...
i wonder y u even call it a poem...
i say its terrible XD | |
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~CaRyNn~
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:02 pm | |
| aww thats mean~ i tot u admired me? nt mus bodek one merh? | |
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Lyn~
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:04 pm | |
| swt la ryn..
n sweet.. is mean.. xD | |
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Sweet Innocence
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:05 pm | |
| *rolls eye*
wat can i say?
i dun like half of d poem | |
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~CaRyNn~
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:07 pm | |
| =.= u roll ure eyes alot. hopefully it doesnt pop out. | |
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Sweet Innocence
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:08 pm | |
| its too small 2 b able 2 roll out
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Lyn~
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:13 pm | |
| i bet thats y u get headache alot XD | |
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Sweet Innocence
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:18 pm | |
| i dun get headache a lot
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Joel T
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:44 pm | |
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Joel T
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:51 pm | |
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Starlightz
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Wed Jul 02, 2008 8:46 pm | |
|  lol... dis emoticon rolls his eyes halfway only = = | |
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Joel T
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Wed Jul 02, 2008 10:56 pm | |
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Starlightz
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Thu Jul 03, 2008 10:40 pm | |
| since when i roll my eyes? = = | |
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Joel T
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Starlightz
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Fri Jul 04, 2008 12:04 am | |
|  ... mayb i did gua... i 4gt or smthg... or mayb i didnt notice XD | |
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Joel T
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| | Subject: Re: Hope comes knocking. Sat Jul 05, 2008 4:09 pm | |
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