Final goodbye

Posts : 28 Join date : 2008-06-14

Final Goodbye

The way you laugh, the way you smile
You sometimes go crazy and even turn wild
With you around, my worst pain turned mild
Your smile faded my pain, away for miles

With you around, you made me forget my fear
When I am sad, you were there to wipe my tears
When I need someone to talk to, you are there to hear
You are like an angel conquering my fears

But I fear you may forget everything here
Don’t you know you are actually very dear?
If you can stay, I will shed happy tears
Because you are important to me, can you hear?

I can’t help myself but to have this feeling
If you are gone will I see my heart healing?
But there it goes, time just fly
It’s time to say my final goodbye

Comments and rating plss

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sat Jun 14, 2008 9:05 pm

not bad... not bad ^^

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sat Jun 14, 2008 10:03 pm

nice... ^_^

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 12:46 am

gud gud~

Admin Posts : 538 Join date : 2008-06-11 Age : 31

why are all the poems about HER or HIM
or THEY & i SEE you..
walk pass la.
cry la..
tear la..
swt la..
Very Happy

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 4:31 pm

lol those r typical words man! get used to it

Admin Posts : 538 Join date : 2008-06-11 Age : 31

it depends wat u wanna write only
but u gals write same issue wan..
so i read also biasa d..
surely know wats the nex line

Posts : 154 Join date : 2008-06-11 Location : Earth!!xD

nice poem..xD

Posts : 82 Join date : 2008-06-12

sounds a bit like mun XD
R u sure u're not mun?

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:06 pm

whos sure whos not mun ?

Admin Posts : 538 Join date : 2008-06-11 Age : 31

if not so sweet and innonecnt is a guy from audi..
y know so many ppl from our skool..
swt la u...
get lost la..

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:30 pm

yala !!!
true oso har..
but if sweet is frm audi, ryn must hav told him xD

Admin Posts : 538 Join date : 2008-06-11 Age : 31

why in the 1st place wanna tell him?
unless HE is from skool la..
i tot only our school?and our form nia?
boo sama ryn..
BOO...

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:37 pm

BOOOOOOO !!!!!
rofl..
i think he frm our sch..

Admin Posts : 538 Join date : 2008-06-11 Age : 31

he obviously is la...
getting on my nerves also

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:44 pm

yaa..
lets go on a strike..
bring sepanduk oso.. xD xD

Admin Posts : 538 Join date : 2008-06-11 Age : 31

yea bring then throw to caryn's computer

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 5:55 pm

xD she will pau cha infront of u larrr....

Admin Posts : 538 Join date : 2008-06-11 Age : 31

correct..
THEN WE THROW AT HER 1ST!!!

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 6:01 pm

wah.....
u go do la..
i watch 1st..

Admin Posts : 538 Join date : 2008-06-11 Age : 31

cheh..cannot
u muz join me IN MY CONQUEST!!
to RULE THE WORLD!!!!
MAUAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA Twisted Evil

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 6:07 pm

ohh...
that sounds... er... out of the point..
go on a strike of not allowing anonymus identities~

Admin Posts : 538 Join date : 2008-06-11 Age : 31

yea...
just in this forum la of course

Posts : 82 Join date : 2008-06-12

u guys really R pathetic.
bring ur whining somewhere else.

I really expected joel 2 be more grown up.
N lyn too... how OLD r u guys?!

Subject: Re: Final goodbye Sun Jun 15, 2008 9:49 pm

haiyooo~ stop stop enuf. we shall close this topic on the unknown ppl thing okay? friends argue n friends fight but nt over board pls. sweet oso enuf d laa~ n juz so u all noe. u throw my precious husband i throw u er!